Talk:Wheels - Revision history

mbutcher at 22:56, 6 August 2008

2008-08-06T22:56:28Z

mbutcher at 22:55, 6 August 2008

2008-08-06T22:55:47Z

mbutcher at 22:55, 6 August 2008

2008-08-06T22:55:21Z

duke_toaster at 17:20, 9 January 2008

2008-01-09T17:20:31Z

geeman1 at 15:42, 29 December 2007

2007-12-29T15:42:15Z

geeman1 at 15:37, 29 December 2007

2007-12-29T15:37:51Z

New page

I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)
Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)

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	Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster\|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)		Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster\|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

−	I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it ~~had~~.--[[User:mbutcher\|mbutcher]] 23:55, 6 August 2008 (BST)	+	I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it has.--[[User:mbutcher\|mbutcher]] 23:55, 6 August 2008 (BST)

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−	I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it had.	+	I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it had.--[[User:mbutcher\|mbutcher]] 23:55, 6 August 2008 (BST)

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	I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)		I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)
	Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1\|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)		Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1\|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
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		+	Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster\|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

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−	I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)	+	I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)
	Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1\|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)		Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1\|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)