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I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)
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I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :)
 
Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
 
Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)

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I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :) Comments about this? --geeman1 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)