Difference between revisions of "Talk:Wheels"
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Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC) | Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC) | ||
| − | I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it | + | I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it has.--[[User:mbutcher|mbutcher]] 23:55, 6 August 2008 (BST) |
Latest revision as of 23:56, 6 August 2008
I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :) Comments about this? --geeman1 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. duke_toaster 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
I added a few sentences in the EX section about what features it has.--mbutcher 23:55, 6 August 2008 (BST)
