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I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :) | I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :) | ||
Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC) | Comments about this? --[[User:geeman1|geeman1]] 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. [[User:duke toaster|duke_toaster]] 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 17:20, 9 January 2008
I think this whole page should be almost fully redone. It contains a lot of maybes and I thinks. Also writing in "I" form seems non-wikilike, it should be in passive form instead ie. formal text. So the page needs a rewrite and reformatting would also make it more clear. Maybe some tables for wheel comparasion and/or infoboxes for the wheels. Anyway it's a big change so I decided to inform you lot about this. I'll see if I can do it myself, but help is also apprecieted :) Comments about this? --geeman1 15:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
Yeah, I'll do a bit of a rewrite. duke_toaster 17:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
